Antonio Gil-Torres
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The last concert of the tour had ended in a spectacular way, the five members of the band were in the dressing room, enjoying the moment, drinking, shouting, jumping and melting into hugs…
The exaltation was such that no one noticed the strange presence, but there he was, in the darkness slowly approaching Tera, the group’s drummer and who was closest to him at that moment.
He was about to get it, on previous occasions he had been about to, but he was always discovered and expelled without being able to fulfill his wish.
This time it would not be the same, he had thought about everything carefully for weeks.
He attended each of the concerts on the tour and was finally in the place and time he wanted.
He took another step, reached into his pocket until he felt what he was looking for, pressed hard, another stealthy step, a deep breath and a touch on Tera’s back.
– But what the hell, who are you? Tera and the rest of the gang jumped back and quickly protected themselves with chairs and any object that could serve as a weapon.
– An autograph please? – At that time everyone was speechless, a freak had passed the entire security cordon and was before them with a pen in one hand, in the other a revolver.
– Calm down man, of course we will sign you – Dundo intervened, voice of the band, who took an accurate shot between his eyebrows. They all screamed for a few seconds, exactly during the seconds it took to aim and shoot each one of them, thus ending the soundtrack of a nightmare, the one that the band made him live for so many years, him and especially his Dear daughter.
👨🎤 The unknown person who follows you all the tour, who is in the front row of the concerts, finally sneaks backstage. What intentions does he have? What dialogue do you have with your protagonist, who leads the band?
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Antonio Gil-Torres
Born in Terrassa, Author of the books Sincericides and Lies in 2019, Rock&Soul 2021 and En…
Member for 11 months.
10 published stories.
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